For my Bella

Your Star

I took her by the hand
My star fading thus
Her heartbeat drained
Her voice a whisper
I wanted to set her free to fly
Somehow she couldn’t only twinkled
And winked ever so softly
I have her a kiss and said goodbye
As I tossed her up, up to the night’s sky.

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3 thoughts on “For my Bella

  1. Lovely… beautiful imagery for me.
    (question… should there be a comma after “Somehow she couldn’t”?… also penultimate line, it is “I have” or “I gave”?

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